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Journey to faith's end

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I was blinded
black matter invading my mind
visions of hell and thereafter
I cried for the so called Savior

I was dancing
an infinite waltz, a never ending battle
I feared the sunrise would hold naught
I feared to fall inexorably

I was naive
my faerie-tale sensibilities clouding me
always having been enlightened
I was fading

I am pure
filtered of the filth and lies
my eyes burn
away the divine truth.
Exactly what the title says. This poem reflects my loss of faith, it's very personal as my whole life I had believed in something that now seems like a myth to me.

Also-I do not hate religion XD In fact, I find it is beautiful when has faith and hope and such because they want to, I only hate religion being forced upon you, being forced to follow things you don't like or understand or agree with.

In fact, I am still unsure of what I really believe.
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Dragonrider4000's avatar
This is a wonderful poem, I only feel ease of reading could be increased by use of more grammar.