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Utopia
they called it
more of a dystopia
we were stumbling
waiting for an
oasis mirage, a salvation
questioning our existence
questioning the future
formation of helium
and hydrogen as we
lay transfixed at what
may
lay beyond
Then
one eternity later
one unfathomable
indefinable
moment later
we were nothing more
than blasted bits
forsaken fossils
of moronic bliss
volatile
rag
dolls
centuries later
life still leaked from our pores
we slipped into dream cast eyes
reduced to fibrous beings
believe, we sighed in the breeze
incredulously...our words cluttered
the spaces of electrons!
That was the time
our dead remote
minds
still dreamed of
awakening
when our planet
still had hope
Now it is the temporal length of event
when the nuclear cloud
when the harsh mess
of skin, tissue, bone and decay
radiates to the injured hearts
and diseases them
in ways the world
could have somehow
maybe
turned away
eleventh hour gone
we told you what
is
coming
we told you to believe
Can you recognise the apocalypse?
No,
not the end of the world.
The uncovering.
they called it
more of a dystopia
we were stumbling
waiting for an
oasis mirage, a salvation
questioning our existence
questioning the future
formation of helium
and hydrogen as we
lay transfixed at what
may
lay beyond
Then
one eternity later
one unfathomable
indefinable
moment later
we were nothing more
than blasted bits
forsaken fossils
of moronic bliss
volatile
rag
dolls
centuries later
life still leaked from our pores
we slipped into dream cast eyes
reduced to fibrous beings
believe, we sighed in the breeze
incredulously...our words cluttered
the spaces of electrons!
That was the time
our dead remote
minds
still dreamed of
awakening
when our planet
still had hope
Now it is the temporal length of event
when the nuclear cloud
when the harsh mess
of skin, tissue, bone and decay
radiates to the injured hearts
and diseases them
in ways the world
could have somehow
maybe
turned away
eleventh hour gone
we told you what
is
coming
we told you to believe
Can you recognise the apocalypse?
No,
not the end of the world.
The uncovering.
Literature
Angstxiety
I am work weak on Wednesday
in a heap of hangover and hesitation
with fingers on a phone haptically
actively anticipating feedback—
I need that why do I need that.
My angst and anxiety
is constant and courses
and throbs with a pulse
that demands concern
of a baby boomer crooning poetic
in the distance to call me antisocial, or you know,
you could just call me.
If being this busy in an age
of constant communication
feels like having slept
but not feeling rested,
I'd rather cancel my plans
like a responsible millennial
and go to bed.
Literature
...
fine then, just leave me alone
let me rot in this "shithole" existence
you don't like it?
well it's none of your business
try to turn me around
put me on "the right path"?
it won't work
you haven't experienced such wrath
and then experienced the everlasting calm
but you'll never understand
all you know is the bad
all you remember is sad
i'm sorry you felt the need to cut me off
it's a real shame
and you weren't even involved
as if our friendship was a game
well i miss your friendship
you hurt me just as badly
as the one you criticize
still, i would renew our bond, gladly
if you weren't this way or that
stubborn, hard headed
just open you
Literature
17 - just forget it
now ain't this exactly what you pictured
that I say my goodbyes, for forever
never have to lie again
never have to pretend again
now ain't this exactly what you wanted
say your goodbyes, for forever
I won't be bothered again
too much pain
this unexplainable hatred
in all my corners, it's nestled
"like a whisper dried up on the lips
whose longing wasn't good enough
alone you scream and break, fear and disappear
and you're melted to the universe's core"
and I fucking say
goodbye to all (y)our bullshit
'cause ain't that exactly what you wanted
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nos·trum
/ˈnästrəm/
Noun
A medicine, esp. an ineffective one, prepared by an unqualified person.
A pet scheme, esp. one for bringing about some social or political reform or improvement.
Synonyms
panacea - cure-all
Must have read/seen something before I fell asleep and forgot, because I was having some weird dreams, and then I came up with this XD
Yay
EDIT:Since people have been thinking about the story behind this, here goes:
There is-a sci fi theme of there having been some sort of race before the creation of the earth and sun etc-then the big bang, referenced by the 'blasted bits' paragraph, and because of this they were destroyed and reduced to little bits that fly around, and they have 'the knowledge' as all ancients do, they try to explain this but of course they are shown the ignorance of human kind 'our words cluttered the spaces of electrons' and then it is too late, and as the apocalypse is nigh, they tell them that you imagined the destruction of the world, it is basically the uncovering of a great secret that will change the world (because that is what apocalypse really means, uncovering of knowledge, however the destruction idea was taken from biblical ideas).
I would have made it into an actual story, cause I love the idea and I love writing, but I always give up on my stories and I felt I would write it better so to speak in poetry form ^^
/ˈnästrəm/
Noun
A medicine, esp. an ineffective one, prepared by an unqualified person.
A pet scheme, esp. one for bringing about some social or political reform or improvement.
Synonyms
panacea - cure-all
Must have read/seen something before I fell asleep and forgot, because I was having some weird dreams, and then I came up with this XD
Yay
EDIT:Since people have been thinking about the story behind this, here goes:
There is-a sci fi theme of there having been some sort of race before the creation of the earth and sun etc-then the big bang, referenced by the 'blasted bits' paragraph, and because of this they were destroyed and reduced to little bits that fly around, and they have 'the knowledge' as all ancients do, they try to explain this but of course they are shown the ignorance of human kind 'our words cluttered the spaces of electrons' and then it is too late, and as the apocalypse is nigh, they tell them that you imagined the destruction of the world, it is basically the uncovering of a great secret that will change the world (because that is what apocalypse really means, uncovering of knowledge, however the destruction idea was taken from biblical ideas).
I would have made it into an actual story, cause I love the idea and I love writing, but I always give up on my stories and I felt I would write it better so to speak in poetry form ^^
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This is so great. The flow of it makes me feel like it's being read to me in such a powerful and meaningful voice. A definite fav.